"don't stop me wanting to read it, but do adjust the way i would." LOVE this, and also your note on positionality. i feel like good critique sometimes hinges upon relaying to the reader where youre coming from--you gotta contextualize!!

as for critique, this is for a show, but I enjoy this one on over the garden wall http://strangehorizons.com/non-fiction/reviews/over-the-garden-wall/ and this writer has a lot of other reviews too, might be some anglophone novels in there